Indian gang accused of witchcraft

From the Herald:

Gang blinds Indian woman, accused of witchcraft

That’s the right way to read that comma, correct?  I think a semi-colon would strengthen the connection of Gang to “accused of witchcraft”.

Hmm.  Better check carefully: OK, these 40-odd words don’t seem to have any new errors in them.

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